Vertin’s mind raced. He’d bypassed the school’s mainframe to expose favoritism in grading—a publicity stunt. But Lira? She’d gone straight for a hidden server. “Why’d they let us access the system?”
Start writing, focus on building the world, the tension between Vertin and authority, and the unfolding mystery. Use dialogue to develop characters. Show Vertin's skills through actions. Maybe include a time limit to add urgency. -ENG- Vertin in detention -RJ01250668-
Endings: They can escape, expose the truth, or find a way to shut down the program. Maybe leave it open-ended for suspense. Vertin’s mind raced
Twist: The school is testing students' problem-solving skills, and detention is part of an experiment. Or maybe the principal is an AI that's malfunctioning. Maybe Vertin's hacking was an attempt to find the truth, leading to detention as a form of control. She’d gone straight for a hidden server
